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Lovers Quarrel

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You told me you wouldn't leave me!
put it down, please, lets talk...
You said you would love me forever!!
Don't, it can't end like this, what are you doing?
You said you were mine!
It's not that simple...wait..
You told me you loved me!
I did, I do…
STOP FUCKING LYING!
i'm not, I swear..
YOU SAID YOU WERE THE ONE!

[the sound of the revolver releasing the cylinder, reverberates and ricochets throughout the abandoned space.]

p..please, let me go
put your back against mine!
PLEASE DONT DO THIS, I LOVE YOU
You should have stayed by my side
I didn't have a choice! believe me !!
goodnight, my love, sweet dreams
no, NO!! STOP! DON'T I...

[pressure is slowly applied to the trigger and a shot is heard, followed by silence]

[The bullet pierces through the flesh, once, then once again, two bodies collapse on top of each other, in a red coat of lovers quarrel.]
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ImpalerQueen's avatar
Ouch...love sure does hurt! :D
I'm never looking at romantic movies the same way again...