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Don't wince at my scars, instead use them to find where I am broken, and put your body against the cracks.
Don't let me fall out of myself again, the parts might fit together, but the breaks are never clean.
Sometimes I feel like glass in the middle of a war zone, just the sound of goodbye may destroy me.
I've picked up the pieces before, cut myself with shards of who I was, carefully pasted them together with who I am, hoping no one would notice.
The trouble is the masking tape I used, doesn't seem to mask anymore.
The trouble is I leave tiny bits of myself behind me, just so I can be found.
The trouble is my heart is made of clay and it might just break with one more fall.

Maybe that's the wonder of me, even once i've broken…I can break again.

© Rocio Belinda Mendez
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Thank you muchly :) I appreciate it xx
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EvilEspressoDrinks Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Student Writer
I can relate to this, quite much. 
It is an amazing work, and beautifully well written, as well. 
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
oh thank you for reading me :) i'm glad you liked it xx
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EvilEspressoDrinks Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Student Writer
No problem!
It was very good. 
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014   General Artist
I've picked up the pieces before, cut myself with shards of who I was :heart: I loved that line!

The entire piece is wonderful, I like the amount of metaphors you've used here and how well they all come together so well.
The description is wonderful and clear with strong emotions.
Wonderful writing! :love:
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
oh thank you so much dear! I appreciate your words, and you reading me :):) xx
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014   General Artist
You're welcome :heart: it was my pleasure :)
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Gracefool-Lyn Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
This is really well written.
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