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"Do you want to know the secret to life?"
he taps his finger on his cigarette to drop the ash. He looks into your eyes as thick smoke escapes his parted mouth.

"I guess…"
you glance down at the table. His stare is piercing.

"Embrace the possibility that you're not even here, that this is all a dream."

––"...Ok"
You keep your eye on him as he leans in closer…

"Now release the presumption that it is your dream."

He gets up and walks away. You stay seated watching the smoke rise from the still lit cigarette in the ashtray.


© Rocio Belinda Mendez
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VexVaudlain Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
*blink blink* Wow.
I think I sat here for 10 minutes trying to do exactly that. Absolutely fantastic!
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
oh my, thank you so much. I appreciate you reading me x
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VexVaudlain Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
I'm just glad that this was one of the first works I read here since joining. Brilliantly written!
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
mm awesome. I'm glad also :) x
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BellaRomatica Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
This is so deep man...
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
:) thanks 
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Bbburn Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Damn
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
thanks for reading x
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
I swear, I'm finding so many philosophical, powerful pieces on DA today! I just admire how people can so much with so few words/phrases. It seems so much better than my pages upon pages of prose...
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
hehe, I write long ass ones myself too :) this one just came to me quite quickly so I decided to keep it succinct :) thanks for reading me! xx
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