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"Do you want to know the secret to life?"
he taps his finger on his cigarette to drop the ash, he looks into your eyes, as thick smoke escapes his parted mouth.

"I guess…"
you glance down at the table, his stare is piercing.

"embrace the possibility that you're not even here, that this is all a dream"

––"...Ok"
you keep your eye on him, as he leans in closer…

"now release the presumption that it's your dream."

He gets up and walks away, as you stay seated watching the smoke rise from the still lit cigarette in the ashtray.


© Rocio Belinda Mendez
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BellaRomatica Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
This is so deep man...
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
:) thanks 
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Bbburn Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Damn
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
thanks for reading x
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
I swear, I'm finding so many philosophical, powerful pieces on DA today! I just admire how people can so much with so few words/phrases. It seems so much better than my pages upon pages of prose...
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
hehe, I write long ass ones myself too :) this one just came to me quite quickly so I decided to keep it succinct :) thanks for reading me! xx
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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desert-druid Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it... it kind of touches on doubts I think we all have from time to time.
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
:) yesssir x
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DarkX1122 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Interesting little piece, I like it.
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