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I retire from the crowd, feeling kinda strange.
This anxiety is drowning me, somethings gotta change.
I gotta get in my mind's soul and start to rearrange––
your confidence for my sadness, care for an exchange?

This loneliness has company,
Gaining on me subtly,
I'm handing out custody,
I'm left with nil––utterly.

I think about tomorrow; wasting my today.
Already feel broke, before I even gotta pay.
I hear what I wanna hear, not what you have to say.
Losing bits of self; as I try and make my way.

This stressing is messing––
maybe it's a blessing;
dressing up depressing.
Trying to fool me, as it's assessing––
keeping me on my toes daily; guessing.

I need a change, now
I want to be the cause of "wow"
Just give me a go; allow,
I'll be the answer to your "how".


© Rocio Belinda Mendez
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:iconricardo-orozco:
Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i like this flow of everything : ) and we should make a rap together ;)
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:iconrociobelindamendez:
rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
haha thanks, yeah why not? you can rap it :P x
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shelleypalmer Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, definitely would make a good rap and having had experienced extreme anxiety (only just conquered this) I can say this captures it.
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rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
>< really? i'm glad it resonates, sorry you've felt this way though. Thank you for reading me xx
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That-Dude247 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow that's great. Its really unique, and like many great poems it has the feeling of a song, in my opinion
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:iconrociobelindamendez:
rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
oh thanks :) yeah a lot my rhyming poems with internal line rhyme feel a bit like a song or rap :) thanks for reading, glad u like it xx
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TwinSocks Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ah, yes... anxiety is a... really annoying thing~ xD
wish there was an on/off switch for that~!  - w -'

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:iconrociobelindamendez:
rociobelindamendez Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014
>< indeed, an on/off switch for any emotion or thought would be stellar :) thanks for reading x
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TwinSocks Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome~! ^ ^
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LordofPhoenixDawn Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
I can so relate with the feelings here. Well said. ^_^
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